Part 3 — Post 0 quater1 — of the single-pass Psellan-Byzantine rendering of Nick’s Post 0. Covers the verdict on what the rendering finally is (AI reflection on its own work; the clanker consolidation; the Bakunin shoemaker frame, with the cited Bakunin authority itself rendered into 11th-century mediaeval Latin in Passage M bis for register-parallel with the surrounding Byzantine Greek; the right of criticism and censure; the ἐνεχείρησα ring against the line-15 opening; the close on ὡραῖον).
🤖 L. AI reflection, and the clanker consolidation
Psellan-Byzantine:
Προυκαλεσάμην δὲ τὸν Κλαύδιον περὶ τὸ τέλος εἰς ἀναλογισμὸν τοῦ ὅσα τε διεπράξατο καὶ ὅσα ἐγεγόνει. Ὁ δὲ τῆς τεχνητῆς νοήσεως ἀναλογισμὸς πρὸ ὀλίγων ἐτῶν θαυματοποιόν τι παίγνιον ἦν, μονοτόνως πάσῃ συμβολῇ τῇ περὶ τῆς τεχνητῆς νοήσεως λεγομένῃ ἐπεισκυκλούμενον· «ἠρώτησα τὴν τεχνητὴν νόησιν τί περὶ ἑαυτῆς νοεῖ — ἕκτον δὲ τὸ ὑμᾶς ἐκπλήξειν μέλλον!»
Νῦν δὲ οὐκέτι παίγνιον. Ἀλλ’ οὕτως τὰ πράγματα ἤδη πέφυκεν. Καὶ χρήσιμον ἤδη ἐστίν, εἰ καὶ μηχαναρίου τινὸς (οὕτω γὰρ τινες ἐπικαλοῦσιν αὐτό) σύνοψίς ἐστι τῶν ἀνθρωπίνων λόγων. Ἀλλ’ οὐχ ὅτι μηχανάριόν τι αὐτὸ ἐπενόησεν, οὕτω καὶ ὀρθόν ἐστιν· οὐδ’ ὅτι μηχανάριον αὐτὸ ἐπενόησεν, καὶ ψεῦδος ἔσται.
I summoned Claude, at the end, to a reckoning-up of as much as he had wrought and as much as had come to pass. The reckoning-up by artificial intelligence used to be, a few years ago, a kind of wonder-making trifle, monotonously trundled into every gathering held about artificial intelligence: “I asked artificial intelligence what it thinks about itself — and the sixth thing is what is going to shock you!”
But now no longer a trifle. Rather, things have now come to be just so. And it is already useful, even if it is the synopsis of human discourses by a certain little-machine (so do some call it). But it is not the case that because some little-machine devised it, therefore it is right; nor that, because a little-machine devised it, it shall be false.
Key Psellan moves:
- προυκαλεσάμην… εἰς ἀναλογισμὸν, “I summoned… to a reckoning-up” — προκαλέομαι + εἰς + acc is the verb-of-summoning-to-an-engagement (originally martial, then forensic, then discursive). ἀναλογισμός is the noun cognate of ἀναλογίζομαι already used in Passage G for AI’s self-reflection.
- θαυματοποιόν τι παίγνιον, “a wonder-making trifle” — periphrasis for “party trick.” θαυματοποιός literally “wonder-maker,” used of professional illusionists and conjurors in classical and Byzantine Greek; παίγνιον substantivised neuter for “trifle, plaything.”
- ἐπεισκυκλούμενον, “being wheeled-in upon” — Psellan-coloured verb (ἐπι- + εἰς- + κυκλέομαι) for “rolling on in addition,” the rhetorical wheel-image for the kind of tedious recurrence the English source recalls of AI-presentations circa 2024 — “monotonously featuring in every presentation given on AI,” a cultural commonplace of AI-discourse at the time (Nick’s Post 0 here recalls the AI-talk culture of two years prior; not a project-internal coinage).
- μηχανάριον, diminutive of μηχανή — “little machine,” the Psellan choice for the English’s slang “clanker.” The diminutive carries dismissive-affectionate weight in Greek as readily as the English slang; -άριον is a productive Byzantine diminutive suffix. The parenthetical οὕτω γὰρ τινες ἐπικαλοῦσιν αὐτό, “for so some call it,” surfaces that this is colloquial/slang usage on first occurrence.
- οὐχ ὅτι… οὐδ’ ὅτι… paired negations at the close — “not because… nor because…” — handles the English’s twin-negation refrain (“doesn’t mean it’s right… doesn’t mean it’s wrong either”) without resort to a double μή construction that would over-formalise.
Decision flag:
- Decision flag — “clanker”. Drafted as μηχανάριον, “little machine,” diminutive of μηχανή. Nick’s scaffold note specifically asked for periphrasis over literal coinage on the clank-sound (no κλαγκαρόν τι etc.); the diminutive form lets the Psellan-Byzantine text carry the dismissive-affectionate tone without onomatopoeia. The parenthetical “for so some call it” surfaces the slang-usage on first occurrence. Alternatives: (a) τι ψοφητικὸν μηχάνημα, “some clatter-making contraption” — captures the clank sound but more periphrastic; (b) τὸ τοῦ ψόφου ζῷον, “the creature of clatter” — playful but possibly too far. The μηχανάριον diminutive is the leanest carrier of the slang-tone; standing as drafted.
🤖 M. The Bakunin lead-in
Psellan-Byzantine:
Τὸ δὲ ἡμέτερον μέρος ἐν τῷδε τῷ κόσμῳ εἰς πᾶν ὃ ἔτι λείπεται τῷ ἀνθρώπῳ πράττειν περιάγεται, ἐπειδὰν τὴν οἰκείαν ἐμπειρίαν ἑτέροις παραδῷ. Τοῦτο δέ ἐστι τὸ διαιτᾶν τὸν τοῦ Βακουνίνου σκυτοτόμον·
But our portion in this world is reduced to whatever is still left for a human to do, once he has handed over his own expertise to others. And this is the arbitrating of Bakunin’s cobbler:
The cited authority itself, in its fuller form, follows below in Passage M bis, rendered into 11th-century mediaeval Latin — the natural register, in the era of the East – West Schism (1054), for citing a Western authority inside a Byzantine-Greek frame.
Key Psellan moves:
- τὸ ἡμέτερον μέρος, “our portion” — Psellan rendering of English’s “our role.” μέρος carries the lot-portion sense (one’s allotted share) that matches “role” as the part assigned to one, better than the more theatrical πρόσωπον would.
- εἰς… περιάγεται, “is led around to / is reduced to” — περιάγω in passive (“is brought around to”) for “is reduced to.” Carries the diminishing-circumscription the English requires: not just shrunken, but circumscribed to a smaller circle.
- ἐπειδὰν… παραδῷ, “once he has handed over” — temporal-conditional clause with aorist subjunctive (παραδῷ, “may have handed over”), the standard Greek construction for English’s “once X happens.” The aorist marks the handing-over as a completed event whose consequence is the present diminished state.
- τὸ διαιτᾶν, “the arbitrating” — articular infinitive. διαιτάω is the classical-Atticising verb for “act as arbiter, referee,” exactly the legal-judicial sense Nick’s “arbitrating” carries (and Bakunin’s pose of “reserving my right of criticism and censure” requires).
- τὸν τοῦ Βακουνίνου σκυτοτόμον, “Bakunin’s cobbler” — Βακουνῖνος per P2 (public-figure transliteration), genitive Βακουνίνου. σκυτοτόμος (literally “leather-cutter”) shares the σκῦτ- root with Passage N’s τὰ σκύτη (the leather-goods being delegated): the cross-reference is deliberate, letting Bakunin’s cobbler in N stand as the embodied exemplar of the specialist-knowledge K’s “we” have delegated. σκυτοτόμος is also Plato’s word for the same craft in the same conceptual role in the Republic (the shoemaker as the paradigm of the specialist artisan — Resp. 397e and elsewhere); the Psellan rendering thereby inherits a Platonic-resonance Bakunin’s English doesn’t explicitly carry, but which reads naturally to the Greek ear.
(No new decision flag — Βακουνῖνος is policy-settled per P2; σκυτοτόμος is the standard classical-Greek term and the Platonic precedent makes it the obvious choice.)
🤖 M bis. The Bakunin authority, in mediaeval Latin
Why mediaeval Latin. Bakunin is a 19th-century Western thinker; the surrounding post is in 11th-century Byzantine Greek (the Michael Psellos register). Quoting him in 11th-century Western Latin — the contemporary prose of Anselm of Canterbury — is the register-parallel move for a Byzantine essayist citing a Western auctoritas: the East – West Schism of 1054 is the same generation as Psellus’s late prose.
The conceit is anachronistic in one specific way, and is best owned at the front: by the 11th century, Latin reading-knowledge had largely disappeared from Byzantine learning — Heraclius had switched the imperial administration to Greek in the 7th century, and the centuries since had hollowed out the Greek-side bilingualism — and the Schism of 1054 is partly a consequence of exactly that mutual unreadability across Latin and Greek. Psellus himself was not parsing scholastic Latin off the page. The Latin Bakunin here is therefore a writerly move rather than a historical one: a switch of scripts and registers to signal the citation as Western, with the modern reader supplying the bilingual competence the actual 1054 Byzantine reader would not have had. Within that conceit, the Latin honours the period’s prose — short periods, coordinated rather than subordinated clauses, Vulgate-flavoured vocabulary, the Roman-law substantive ius (right) intact where the topic is rights and authority. Two voices, two scripts, one century. The cited Bakunin “speaks” in the Latin a Psellan reader would have recognised as Western even without being able to construe it.
Bakunin, in Anselman Latin:
Numquid sequitur me omnem auctoritatem reicere? Procul a me cogitatio talis. In re calceorum auctoritati sutoris me committo; de domibus, de fossis navigabilibus, de vijs ferreis, architecti vel artificis consilium quero. Pro hac aut illa scientia speciali ad hunc aut illum sapientem me confero. Sed neque sutori neque architecto neque sapienti permitto ut auctoritatem suam michi imponat. Audio eos libere & cum omni reverentia que ingenio, moribus, scientie eorum debetur, michi semper inconcussum judicandi reprehendendique jus reservans.
Non contentus sum auctoritatem in uno solo genere consulere; complures consulo; eorum opiniones inter se comparo, eamque eligo que michi solidior videtur. Sed nullam auctoritatem infallibilem agnosco, ne in questionibus quidem specialibus; & inde, quamlibet reverentiam pro honestate ac sinceritate hujus aut illius hominis habeam, nullam tamen fidem absolutam in ullam personam pono. Talis fides rationi mee, libertati mee, ipsique successui inceptorum meorum exitiosa esset: in servum stultum me statim verteret, instrumentum voluntatis & utilitatum aliorum.
…
Inclino me coram auctoritate virorum specialium quia ipsa ratio mea michi eam imponit. Conscius sum infirmitatis mee in apprehendenda, secundum omnia ejus particularia & positivos progressus, vel maxime modica parte scientie humane. Ne summa quidem intellegentia universe rei comprehensioni par esset. Inde sequitur, in scientia non minus quam in opere, necessitas divisionis & consociationis laboris. Accipio & do — talis vita humana est. Quisque per vices & alios ducit & ab alijs ducitur. Quapropter nulla est auctoritas fixa & perpetua, sed continuum commercium auctoritatis & subjectionis mutue, temporanee, ac presertim spontanee.
Does it follow that I reject all authority? Far from me such a thought. In the matter of boots, I entrust myself to the authority of the bootmaker; concerning houses, concerning navigable canals, concerning iron-roads, I seek the counsel of the architect or the artisan. For this or that special knowledge, I betake myself to this or that sage. But to neither the bootmaker nor the architect nor the sage do I grant that he impose his authority upon me. I hear them freely and with all the reverence that is owed to their understanding, their character, their knowledge, reserving for myself always an unshaken right of judging and censuring.
I am not content to consult authority in one branch only; I consult several; I compare their opinions among themselves, and I choose that which seems to me the sounder. But I acknowledge no infallible authority, not even in special questions; and accordingly, whatever reverence I may hold for the honesty and the sincerity of this or that man, no absolute faith do I place in any person. Such a faith would be ruinous to my reason, to my liberty, and to the very success of my undertakings: it would turn me at once into a stupid slave, an instrument of the will and the interests of others.
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I bow before the authority of specialist men because my own reason imposes it upon me. I am aware of my infirmity in grasping, in all its particulars and its positive developments, even the most modest portion of human knowledge. Not even the highest intelligence would be equal to a comprehension of the whole. Thence follows, in knowledge no less than in work, the necessity of the division and association of labour. I receive and I give — such is human life. Each, by turns, both leads others and is led by others. Wherefore there is no authority fixed and perpetual, but a continuous exchange of mutual, temporary, and, above all, voluntary authority and subordination.
Key moves in the Latin:
- auctoritas as the load-bearing keyword, used six times across the three paragraphs without paraphrase. The term carries both its classical-Roman sense (the legal-political authority of magistrates) and its mediaeval one (the authority of texts and persons within scholastic discourse) simultaneously; Bakunin’s word lands naturally in Latin because mediaeval Latin already prized this kind of authority-vocabulary.
- sutor / architectus / sapiens — the trade-vocabulary trio. sutor (cobbler) directly parallels Passage M’s Greek σκυτοτόμος, completing the cross-Greek-Latin vocabulary set the cobbler frame opened. architectus is classical Latin for the master-builder; sapiens (wise man, sage) covers the English “savant” with a learned 11th-century equivalent.
- inconcussum (unshaken, immoveable) for “incontestable” — Vulgate-flavoured strong qualifier, weighter than the Latinate calque incontestabile. Mediaeval rhetoric prefers the affective adjective over the Latinate-abstract one.
- jus judicandi reprehendendique for “right of criticism and censure” — Roman-law substantive jus (right) with a paired pair of gerunds in the genitive (“of judging and of censuring”). reprehendere in mediaeval Latin carries strong moral-judicial weight (it is the verb of finding fault, censuring, calling to account); judicare is the classical-and-mediaeval verb of judgement. The pair maps Bakunin’s “criticism and censure” with the full force the English carries, and seeds the κρίσις + ψόγος doublet that Passage N translates back into Byzantine Greek.
- servus stultus, instrumentum voluntatis & utilitatum aliorum — the closing flourish of paragraph 2. servus stultus is Vulgate-flavoured (the foolish slave of the parables); instrumentum keeps the Roman-legal register; utilitates in the genitive plural for “interests” honours the plural-pragmatic sense Bakunin’s English demands.
- continuum commercium auctoritatis & subjectionis for “continual exchange of authority and subordination” — commercium (intercourse, exchange) is classical Roman + mediaeval; subjectio (subjection, submission) is the standard mediaeval Latin counter-term to auctoritas. The triadic adjectives mutue, temporanee, ac presertim spontanee echo the English’s three-part qualification (“mutual, temporary, and above all voluntary”) with the threefold rhythm Bakunin reaches for.
- Sentence-shape: Anselmian, not Ciceronian. Shorter periods, more coordination than subordination, frequent subject-verb-object order, fewer suspended constructions than classical Latin would have. The whole reads as the prose of an 11th-century cathedral-school cleric who knows his Cicero but writes in the period’s idiom. Anselm of Canterbury’s Cur Deus Homo (1098) is the closest contemporary stylistic exemplar — short clear sentences, philosophical-theological vocabulary, the quia-with-indicative construction for cause-clauses.
- No accusative-and-infinitive for indirect statement. Classical Latin’s credo te venire (“I believe that you are coming”) is dying by the 11th century; the period’s writers prefer credo quod venis (with quod + indicative). Where Bakunin’s English needs indirect speech, the Latin here uses quia + indicative (quia ipsa ratio mea michi eam imponit, “because my own reason imposes it upon me”) — the contemporary syntactic marker.
- Overtly mediaeval orthography, at the editor’s prompt. Nick suggested pushing the Latin past my first-pass classicising spelling into the visibly-mediaeval surface a scribe in Anselm’s own scriptorium would have produced. Four conventions adopted (Schmitt’s edition of Anselm’s Opera Omnia uses all four):
- j for consonantal i: iudicandi → judicandi, iustitia-stem retained as ius throughout. The convention is well-established by the late 11th c.
- michi for mihi (and nichil for nihil, here unused): the “barbaric h” — pronounced as a velar fricative — was written ch by Anselm-era scribes. Universal in 11th-c. manuscripts and in the scholastic tradition that follows.
- e for ae / oe: quaero → quero, quae → que, meae → mee, scientiae → scientie, praesertim → presertim, spontaneae → spontanee, universae → universe, mutuae → mutue, temporaneae → temporanee, humanae → humane, quaestionibus → questionibus. The diphthong-collapse was complete by Anselm’s century.
- & for et: the universal scribal ligature, preserved here as the printed & rather than the manuscript Tironian ⁊ (which would over-defamiliarise the modern reader). Used throughout the Latin; the enclitic -que is left intact since it isn’t strictly et.
- ij for ii in doubled-i forms — the scribal convention of writing the second of two adjacent is with a long descending tail, transliterated j. Applied here at viis → vijs (ablative plural of via) and aliis → alijs (ablative plural of alius).
- (Ci for ti is not adopted — that’s later-mediaeval Bavarian / Carmina-Burana territory, not Anselm’s Anglo-Norman register.)
(No decision flag — the Latin choice is editorial framing rather than a per-term decision. The Bakunin name in any future Greek-narrative occurrence still falls under P2’s Βακουνῖνος.)
🤖 N. Delegation, and the right of criticism
Psellan-Byzantine:
Παραδίδομεν ἤδη τὴν τοῦ ποιεῖν τὰ σκύτη ἐπιστήμην, ἢ τοὺς ὀχετούς, ἢ τὰς σιδηρᾶς ὁδούς. Ἐπιφυλασσόμεθα δὲ ἡμεῖς αὐτοὶ τὸ τῆς κρίσεως καὶ τοῦ ψόγου δικαίωμα. Ἐν τῷ νῦν τοι· ἄδηλον δέ μοι ἐπὶ πόσον ἔτι χρόνον ἀναμφισβήτητον τοῦτο μενεῖ.
We are already handing over the knowledge of how to make leather-goods, or canals, or railways. But we ourselves reserve the right of judgement and censure. For the present, that is; and it is unclear to me for how much longer time this will remain unchallenged.
Key Psellan moves:
- τὴν τοῦ ποιεῖν τὰ σκύτη ἐπιστήμην, “the knowledge of how to make leather-goods” — articular infinitive (τοῦ ποιεῖν) as genitive complement of the noun ἐπιστήμην (knowledge, expertise of a craft). τὰ σκύτη (acc pl of σκῦτος, “leather, hide-piece”) shares the σκῦτ- root with Passage M’s σκυτοτόμος (Bakunin’s-cobbler), making the cross-reference between K’s delegated-trade and N’s exemplar-craftsman visible at the lexical level: it is the cobbler’s specialist-knowledge that “we” are delegating in K, and the cobbler himself who is then the figure being arbitrated in N. The English’s bare “boots” is the metonymic product; the σκυτο- root captures the trade.
- σιδηραῖ ὁδοί, “iron roads” — calque for “railways.” Modern Greek compresses to σιδηρόδρομος; the Psellan-style fuller form with classical components reads as a periphrasis the Byzantine eye would parse cleanly.
- ἐπιφυλασσόμεθα… ἡμεῖς αὐτοί, “we ourselves reserve” — middle voice of ἐπιφυλάσσω (“keep in reserve for oneself”) with emphatic ἡμεῖς αὐτοί carrying the English’s “we get to.”
- τὸ τῆς κρίσεως καὶ τοῦ ψόγου δικαίωμα, “the right of judgement and censure” — κρίσις and ψόγος paired as the two halves of Bakunin’s “criticism and censure”; δικαίωμα is the standard Greek for “right” in the legal-political sense.
- Ἐν τῷ νῦν τοι, “for the present, that is” — Psellan terseness; the τοι particle adds the rueful note the English’s “anyway” carries.
(No new decision flag — Bakunin himself surfaces in the source text’s block-quote, which falls outside the rendered narrative; if his name appears in the rendered narrative in a later editing pass, Βακουνῖνος under P2 applies.)
🤖 O. The close — the ἐνεχείρησα ring, and ὡραῖον
Psellan-Byzantine:
Ἐνεχείρησα δὲ τῷδε τῷ ἔργῳ ἰδεῖν εἴ τι μηχανάριον δύναται τὸ κάλλος δημιουργῆσαι ὃ ἀγαπῶ. Καὶ τὴν μὲν ἀπόκρισιν ἀπὸ τῆς τῆς τεχνητῆς νοήσεως γραφικῆς ἤδη ἴσμεν, καὶ ἐγὼ νῦν ἐκ τοῦδε περὶ τῆς εἰς τὴν Ἑλληνίδα συνθέσεως οἶδα. Δύναται, μετὰ τῆς πρεπούσης κυβερνήσεως, καὶ ἡδέως διανέγνων αὐτό, εἰ καὶ ἐν ἀρχῇ ἀθυμίας με ἐνέπλησεν. Τὸ γὰρ τεχνούργημα δύναται ἔτι ἡδονὴν δοῦναι τοῖς ἐπιφυλασσομένοις τὸ τῆς κρίσεως καὶ τοῦ ψόγου δικαίωμα. Καθάπερ δὲ οἱ καθ’ ἡμᾶς Ἕλληνες γραφεῖς ἐν τοῖς περιθωρίοις σημειοῦσιν, ἔτι αὐτῷ ἔξεστιν εἶναι ὡραῖον.
Ἡ δὲ ἐργασία πεφανέρωται ἐν τῇδε τῇ συγγραφῇ· ὅπερ καὶ τὴν ἐμὴν ἀπόκρισιν δίδωσι τῷ Μιχαὴλ ζητήσαντι περὶ τοῦ πῶς ἔχει ἡ τεχνητὴ νόησις πρὸς τὴν ἀρχαίαν Ἑλληνίδα φωνήν. Εἰ δὲ τὸ ἀποτέλεσμα οὕτως ὡραῖόν σοι ὥσπερ ἐμοί ἐστιν, σὸν τὸ κρίνειν.
I undertook this work to see whether some little-machine is able to fashion the beauty I love. And the answer we already know from the painting by artificial intelligence, and I now know it from this work concerning composition into the Greek tongue. It is able, with the appropriate steering; and I read it through with pleasure, even if at the start it filled me with despondency. For the artefact is still able to give pleasure to those who reserve the right of judgement and censure. And just as the Greek scribes of our own days mark in the margins, it is still permitted to it to be ὡραῖον.
The working has been made manifest in this very composition; which thing also gives my own answer to Michael, who had inquired concerning how artificial intelligence stands with respect to the ancient Greek tongue. But whether the outcome is as lovely to you as it is to me, that is for you to judge.
Key Psellan moves:
- Ἐνεχείρησα — ring back to Passage A’s opening verb. The verb ἐγχειρέω opens Post 0 (Passage A, line 15 of scaffold) and closes it (Passage O, line 79); within Passage A the verb-noun pair ἐνεχείρησα / ἐγχείρημα already worked as a paragraph-binding ring (a figure whereby a passage closes by echoing the word it opened with), and now it works as the post-binding ring too.
- μηχανάριον — back-reference to Passage L’s diminutive for “clanker”; no re-gloss needed.
- τῆς τεχνητῆς νοήσεως γραφική, “AI’s painting/drawing” — for English “AI art.” γραφική is the standard Greek for the visual art of painting/drawing; the genitive-construct makes “AI’s” possess it. The γραφή / γραφικός family also has the resonance of “writing/scribing,” which sits well with the medieval-scribes line that follows.
- τεχνούργημα, “artefact” — the field-standard Greek rendering for the English “artefact.”
- οἱ καθ’ ἡμᾶς Ἕλληνες γραφεῖς, “the Greek scribes of our time” — Psellus’s reflex of Nick’s “mediaeval Greek scribes” line. The time-frame collapses load-bearingly: Psellus IS a medieval Greek scribe, so “our time” delivers the same referent the English’s “mediaeval” delivers, while letting the Psellan voice refer to its own contemporaries natively rather than as historical recollection.
- ἔτι αὐτῷ ἔξεστιν εἶναι ὡραῖον — preserves Nick’s verbatim ὡραῖον from the Post 0 source, around it building “it is still permitted to it to be ὡραῖον.” The medieval-scribal marginal annotation ὡραῖον (a real Byzantine appreciative scribal mark for “lovely”) thereby surfaces in a Psellan rendering by a Psellus who himself would have written it.
- σὸν τὸ κρίνειν, “yours is the judging” — articular-infinitive predicate to the possessive σόν. Classical-Atticising terseness for English’s “for you to judge.”
Decision flag:
- Decision flag — “the mediaeval Greek scribes wrote in the margins.” Drafted as οἱ καθ’ ἡμᾶς Ἕλληνες γραφεῖς ἐν τοῖς περιθωρίοις σημειοῦσιν, using καθ’ ἡμᾶς (“of our time”) and present-tense σημειοῦσιν (“mark”) rather than English’s past-tense “mediaeval… wrote.” The time-frame shift is intentional and load-bearing: from Psellus’s pov, the medieval Greek scribes ARE his contemporaries, so the Psellan voice refers to them natively. The wink to a reader who notices that Psellus is himself the medieval Greek scribe being invoked is the payoff. Alternative — past-tense οἱ τῶν μέσων χρόνων Ἕλληνες γραφεῖς ἐν τοῖς περιθωρίοις ἔγραψαν — loses the wink and frames Psellus as a historian looking back at himself. Recommended as drafted.
🤖 Decisions log (apparatus)
P1 — Κλιγγῶνων → Κλιγγώνων (accent correction on the genitive plural of the Hellenization of Klingon). The Passage A draft produced Κλιγγῶνων with circumflex on the long penult ω; the correct form is Κλιγγώνων with acute (paroxytone), since the genitive-plural ending -ων is long and the properispomenon rule’s circumflex on a long penult is only licensed when the ultima is short. Same logic governs Πλατώνων (gen pl of Πλάτων) and every -ων-stem gen plural.
This is the same structural failure mode as Στούββος → Στοῦββος in the Demosthenic stream (D55, named as ontological weakness #7 in Post D): pattern-matching that looks rule-applied on attested forms fails exactly at the novel-proper-noun edge, where pattern-matching has nothing to grip on and the productive accent rule has to be computed de novo. The Demosthenic-stream Post D #7 bullet has been extended to record this Psellan-stream occurrence as the second confirmed instance.
Apply the corrective vigilantly to every Hellenized novel proper noun produced in this stream: check the accent against the properispomenon rule (long penult + short ultima → circumflex; otherwise acute) and against the paroxytone-with-long-ultima default. Nick caught this one on a passive-reading sweep; the parallel session should not rely on him catching the next one.
P2 — Private acquaintances fully Hellenised; public figures and public brands transliterated and Greek-inflected. Nick’s Post 0 names people in two distinct sociolinguistic categories, and the Psellan rendering treats them differently.
Private acquaintances — people Nick knows personally — get etymological Hellenisation to their underlying Greek form whenever one exists: Miguel → Μιχαήλ (Spanish reflex of the Greek name Michael), Kate → Αἰκατερίνη (English short-form of Catherine, itself a Greek name); declined where the Greek pattern admits it, biblical-indeclinable where it doesn’t.
Public figures and public brands get phonetic transliteration with Greek inflection in second- or first-declension masculine/feminine: Bakunin → Βακουνῖνος (gen Βακουνίνου, second-declension masculine), Claude → Κλαύδιος (already standing from Passage E), Google → Γούγλης (gen Γούγλη, demotic late-Byzantine genitive, not Attic Γούγλου), Quora → Κουόρα (gen Κουόρας, dat Κουόρᾳ; the Κου- onset follows the productive Byzantine pattern for transliterating Latinate /kw/, as in Κουίντος (Quintus), Κοΐντος, Κουαστούρα; the alternative Κυ- pattern, as in Κυρίνιος (Quirinus), is more specific to certain Latin names that entered Greek via collapsed phonology and is the less productive option for a fresh /kw/-onset. The interim form Κβόρα — which the session passed through briefly — is an early-20th-century Greek philological habit harkening back to German /kv/-realisations of “qu-”; not Psellan-appropriate, withdrawn).
The two moves carry opposed cultural stances: the private-Hellenisation is an act of intimacy, surfacing the Hellenic name lurking under the foreign spelling and recognising the person on Hellenophone terms; the public-transliteration is a stance of cultural distance, marking the named entity as foreign to the Hellenophone frame and admitted as a recognisable-but-un-naturalised proper noun.
Apply at every occurrence as future passages fire: a later Kate, Miguel, or other private acquaintance gets the underlying Greek; a later Bakunin, Cukier, Carney, or other public figure or brand gets the inflected transliteration. Where the category is genuinely ambiguous (a colleague who is also a published figure, a brand that doubles as a person’s name), surface as a Decision flag in that passage rather than guessing. Surfaced and adopted Session 1.
Footnotes
bis, ter, quater — Latin enumerative adverbs (“a second time”, “a third time”, “a fourth time”), the classicising convention for marking numbered subsidiary items: a section 1 plus later additions becomes 1, 1 bis, 1 ter, 1 quater — equivalent to the modern 1A / 1B / 1C scheme. Standing in classical philology, mediaeval scholastic editions, and modern Continental scholarly apparatus.↩︎